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I was getting reeady for work when the bell rang. It was the postman bringing me a very particular parcel…

 

… I don’t remember well what it was my feeling in this moment, however I had the perception that something special it was just to happen. I didn’t hope anything refered to work because we had never received any parcel, envelope or box from anybody, in fact, it was the first time that I saw the postman. Neither the shape nor the colour of the box gave to me news.

 

I picked the parcel up from the postman, I gave to him my thanks and I started carefully to open it. My birthday wasn't near and neither anybody was felt in love with me… because of my curiosity, I was quite excited.

 

Finally, I opened the parcel and I became a little upset when  I saw a such important object there was in: Nothing, the box was completely empty. Two hours after that, working on my computer I found the key, on the bottom and the left side of the screen the date was shown: 28th of december, “The Innocent’s Day”.