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IELTS - essay: In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

Submitted by agnes_k on Чт, 07/02/2015 - 03:06



I was asked to describe my opinion about the high rate of unemployment among university and college graduates.

To tell the truth, it is quite a complex problem that is relevant in numerous countries in the world. In my opinion, it is the responsibility of the given nation’s government to take sufficient steps towards a more advanced education and employment system. With the help of that, they could make balance between demand and supply on the labour market.

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Submitted by David Y on Ср, 07/01/2015 - 18:43



Hi everyone!

 

As I comment in my last writing, yesterday I had to travel to Lisbon for a meeting .  I woke up very early because de plane departure was at 8:00 am. The flight was quite good and only lasted one hour, so I could sleep a few minutes.

 

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June Fest

Submitted by Elzio on Ср, 07/01/2015 - 11:58



Today is Friday. These months in Brazil happen the June fest. In this epoch, the people eat typical drink and beer. They dress regional clothes of interior. The food is making with very sugar and alcohol. Every school, clubs, workplace make a fest with very dance.

Succer game

Submitted by madoka8 on Ср, 07/01/2015 - 11:39

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Today, my family watched a soccer game of Japanese national team at a stadium of my hometown.

My wife and two sons drew on their face.

Japan faced Costa Rica.

Kanamori's goal was impressive!

We won the game by 2 to 0.

Hi, I'm Monica from Brazil, I am learning english and would like to make friends with other people to practice English.

Submitted by Mônica.web on Ср, 07/01/2015 - 08:59

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Hi, I'm Monica from Brazil, I am learning english and would like to make friends with other people to practice English.

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