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My favourite film

Submitted by Elsa Cortés on Пт, 01/22/2016 - 12:17



My favourite film is one called "About time" of Richard Curtis. This film is about a boy, Tim Lake, who is 21 years old. He discover that he can travel in time. His father tell him that all the men of his family have had always this power, the one that let you return to the past to a moment, once and again, until get do the right. Like that, Tim decide to return to the past to get win over to Mary, the girl of his dreams.

salam

Submitted by dydy on Пт, 01/22/2016 - 02:09

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hi...how are you friends? i'm looking for friends who can practice english with me and help me to learn spanish....i will help anyone who wants to learn bahsa indonesia....bagaimana? ada yang berminat..............

 

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Me and my country's story - Part 2

Submitted by Axel18 on Чт, 01/21/2016 - 11:30



I'm at my capital's country now. You know I'm from Valencia, it's a city near the Venezuela's capital Caracas. I've come here because I'm looking for a piano, I want to buy it and then sell it to another person. 

I've came here two years ago, and it has changed so much! I really don't like it so much, sincerily it scares a little bit.

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The Green Economy

Submitted by HipoKa on Чт, 01/21/2016 - 10:11



The world is in crise and it is social, economic and environmental. As most of the activities that runs the entire supply chain are measured by its gain and all others economic´s index, the Nature claims for sustainable developement practices.

Nation´s manufactured capital measures is no longer working as the world faces an imminent colapse on it´s natural resources. There will be no capitalism without nattural resources.

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Experience

Submitted by lauxlay on Чт, 01/21/2016 - 08:33

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<html><body><p paragraphcommentsid="7360997" id="7360997">FROM AUGUST 2015
Business Analyst
Data administration : Internal funds, financial instruments, prices and benchmarks within
Dimension software solution (SimCorp)
FROM AUGUST 2011 TO AUGUST 2015
Business Analyst and IT Coordinator

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E-government

Submitted by HipoKa on Чт, 01/21/2016 - 07:56



Nowadays the internet is the most effective communication channel used around the world. Because of it´s numerous social medias and tools, the velocity that all informations can be shared is seen as an important key to democracy by the government and citizens.

All the social and cultural changes made on people´s life by the virtual world, turned passive citizens into participative ones which charges the autorities for transparency, accontability and anti-corruption actions.

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Tyler

Submitted by BloodyFox on Ср, 01/20/2016 - 14:45



Tyler is my favourite mucisian. He's german. He has begun the Love to German. He's so beautiful, with ginger hair and gray-green eyes. And soo thrilling voice. An idean figure. The best songs!

Tyler <3 one love 

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sentence practice

Submitted by Lisa_Aryu on Ср, 01/20/2016 - 06:45



I am trying to build sentences in a formal and business context. Please help correct my errors. Thanks for any comments.

1. Through the introduction of XX Telecommunication Company, we have known that your company is one of the biggest manufacters of precise instruments in the UK. We are looking forward to establishing business relations with your company.

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