Hola, Me llamo Stephanie J. Betancourt. Soy puertorriquena. Soy comica y de piel Morena.Yo soy pequena. Soy una estudiante de la Uinversidad Esperanza. Estudio Ciencias Naturales. Sabes quien es Daddy Yankee? El es de estatura alto en comparacion conmigo. El es rubio y muy famoso tambien. Daddy Yankee es un cantante. La musica de el es muy divertida . Nosotros dos amamos cantar.

Original: Hola, Yo me llama es Stephanie J. Betancourt.

Feedback: Me llamo Stephanie J. Betancourt.

Analysis: I applied this feedback because I confirmed with my notes and with thoughtco.com that you me llamo when introducing yourself to someone else.

Original: Yo soy puertorriquena.

Feedback: Soy puertorriquena.

Analysis: I applied this feedback because when speaking to someone in Spanish yo do not always need to say Yo when talking about yourself.

Original: Yo es Comica Y moreno.

Feedback: Soy comica y de piel Morena.

Analysis: I applied this feedback because I confirmed with spanishdict.com that you say de piel when talking about sink colors in Spanish.

Original: Yo es muy baja tambien.

Feedback: Yo soy pequena.

Analysis: I applied this feedback because I confirmed with spanishdict.com that baja means to get down or fall, and that pequena means small or short in spanich.

Original: Yo es un estudiante en Epseranza Universidad.

Feedback: Soy una estudiante de la Universidad Esperanza.

Analysis: I applied this feedback because when referring to a place you say de la rather than en. I confirmed this with Spanishdict.com.

Original: Mi alcalde es ciencias naturales.

Feedback: Estudio Ciencias Naturales.

Analysis: I applied this feedback because I confirmed with Spanishdict.com that when speaking about your profession it should be capitalized.

Original: El es muy alto de mi.

Feedback: El es de estatura alto en comparacino conmigo.

Analysis: I applied this feedback because I am comparing my height with someone else’s height.

Original: La musica de el es muy divertido.

Feedback: La musica de el es muy divertida.

Analysis: I applied this feedback because musica is feminine so divertido needs to be feminine as well.

Original: Nosotros dos amo cantar.

Feedback: Nosotros dos amamos cantar.

Analysis: I applied this feedback because amo is in singular form and amamos is in plural form because I am speaking about more than one person.

  P.S. My computer does not allow me to put accentes in my writing my apologies.