Ella se llama Kat DeLuna. Ella tiene veintinueve anos. Kat DeLuna es una cantante. Ella es de Republica Dominicana. Ella vives en Nueva York, NY. Ella tienes dos nacionalidades. Las nacionalidades de ella son la Dominicana y la Norte Americana. Ella es baja, bonita y rubia. Ella canta musica pop y r&b. A ella le gusta escribir musica. Ella trabaja con Elephant Man, Busta Rhymes, Don Omar, Trey Songz, Akon, Jeremih, y Onassis. Ella escribe su musica. Ella canta en Ingles y en Espanol. Si yo entiendo su musica.

 

Your Original Sentence: Ella se llama es Kat DeLuna.

Feedback: Ella se llama Kat DeLuna.

Analysis: I applied this correction because there is no need for the “es” in this sentence. I know this because os the notes I took in class.

 

Your Original Sentence: Ella tiene veintinueve.

Feedback: Ella tiene veintinueve anos.

Analysis: I applied this correction because you need to put anos at the end of the sentence so people know what she has 29 of. I know this because of the notes I took during class.

 

Your Original Sentence: Kat DeLuna es un cantante.

Feedback: Kat DeLuna es una cantante.

Analysis: I applied this correction because I am speaking about a woman so “un” should be in the feminine form “una”. I checked with spanishdict.com for the correct form.

 

Your Original Sentence: Ella tienes dos nacionalidades.

Feedback: Ella tienes (posee) dos nacionalidades.

Analysis: I did not apply this correction because “tienes” means to have. I confirmed this with my class notes.

 

Your Original Sentence: La nacionalidades de ella es Dominicana y otra es Norte Americana.

Feedback: Las nacionalidades de ella es son la Dominicana y la Norte Americana.

Analysis: I applied these corrections to my sentence because las should be used since I am speaking about two different nationalities. I confirmed this with Spanishdict.com and my class notes.

 

Your Original Sentence: Ella es baja y, bonita y rubio.

Feedback: Ella es baja, bonita y rubia.

Analysis: I applied these corrections by removing the y between baja and bonita because it is not needed when making a list. the comma is put there in place of the y. I confirmed this with the knowloge I already have with the English language.

 

Your Original Sentence: Ella canta la musica pop y r&b.

Feedback: Ella canta musica pop y r&b.

Analysis: I applied this correction because I confirmed with my class notes and spanishdict.com that la is not used to describe music.

 

Your Original Sentence: Ella gusta escribir musica.

Feedback: A ella le gusta escribir musica.

Analysis: I applied these corrections because I confirmed with Spanishdict.com and my bright spaces notes that using A Le gusta is the correct form for saying someone likes something in Spanish.

 

Your Original Sentence: Ella escribe su Musica.

Feedback: Ella escribe su musica.

Analysis: I applied this correction because you do not need to capitalize musica at the end of a sentence.

 

Your Original Sentence: Ella canta en Ingles y Espanol.

Feedback: Ella canta en Ingles y en Espanol.

Analysis: I applied this correction because I am saying she sings in English and in Spanish. They are to separate things.