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Bonjour ,  je m´appele Xiana , j´ai besoin quelqu´un puisse me corriger textes de 70 mots en français , je dois passer un examen au mois de Septembre , 

 

Mercie Beaucoup 

Xiana 

Hokke and Shochu

ホッケと焼酎

Today we went to Japanese Restaurant named 'Yayoi-ken'. Here is free of white rice. Free!

I ordered a fish set and a raw egg. The fish is atka mackerel, called 'Hokke' in Japan. For the second cup of rice, raw egg and soy sauce is served over it.  I feel very happy with two cups of rice.

On the below picture, we was choosing bottles of distilled spirits called 'Shochu' in Japan. These are presents for our father in Fathers Day. As we have sent them several times before, it has become difficult to choose here...

 

Japanese:

https://www.instagram.com/p/ByxJZTwnA2U/

 

Domino Pizza

domino pizza

I apologize that my first blog is not about Japanese food. Today's our lunch are Domino Pizza because we felt like eating them. 

We always have pizza delivered. But now, If ordering two pizzas to take-away, one pizza is free on Domino Pizza in Japan. Free!

We have ordered two pizzas and I went to get them in the rain. We will also eat them tomorrow morning...

 

Japanese:

https://www.instagram.com/p/ByuJgaWHHBY/

Mock of essay. Could anyone give me a hand with this writing. I have an English exam and need some help

The local goverment has received a grant from Europe to invest in the improvement of the city. Recent polls, contrary to general believe shows that the local people are fond of practice sports rather than other activities such as walking outdoor, cultural activities.

Never have I thought that, mainly elder people, are interested in keep in shape and practice some sports rather than cultural activities. At least, this was said in the last meeting . The people acknowlege that if the Town Hall had invested in a sport center a few years ago. We would not have had the rate of obesity that we have nowadays. The culture of wellness, today is trending. “So this village needs to tune into the new stile of life and new ages”. The Major of the city said.

All and All everything suggest that the next should be a outstanding gym with the latest generation available for all ages. Undoubtedly, It would give more profits than if the money was invested in other options such as, museums, teatres and so on. Not only because for the incomes gained by membership, only available for the local people, but also for the entry ticket need to be paid by outsiders.

However, the same study showed a dropping of cultural activities such as visiting museums, cinemas, teatre, wich are not but positive for the people as well.

But unfortunately, taking into account the local preferences, the best option is to invest the all the money in sport services.

Needless to say, that the virtue lies the middle ground.

Writing practicing

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Okaaaaay Mr Evil ?? i'm talking about my past dream and don't know if i can bring it back or not but we'll see.
5 years ago or more I've watched the first part of a movie is called "set up" it was about dance, they were throughout the movie dancing and making shows, but it's not that cute and tender dance such as tango or something like that it's energetic one such as hip hop ?
They succeed to get me into the movie, since that time i thought more and more about learning it.
This kind of dance makes the one happy, free of thinking, flexible, it releases all the negative energy, and that is what i loved about it ?
but i don't know what happened i remember that i tried to get some youtube videos and start doing like them but i just stopped.

I wouldn't talk about that thing today in this paragraph but i watched the movie 3 hours ago by coincidence on TV and something moved inside me telling me to bring this dream back to life ??