Someone can correct my text ?

I am a biology student and I have seen your video yesterday about your pet shop. I am very chock by what I heard.

Indeed, when we listen you, we feel that animals are simple object that we can buy easily like we buy a bread. It is not normal. Moreover, you sell a pet to someone without advice whereas in the most cases, this person never had pet in its life.

This problem is just a minor problem compare with ma second part. Indeed, even if you become very conscientious, you give a lot of advices, you talk about animals like you talk a human etc… It is not enough.  Firstly, pet shop should not have any cats or dogs because the space is too small for them! Secondly, I think, the seller should be able to refuse to sell an animal to someone. It is not normal that the seller can not refuse to sell whereas it is a person who do not care about animal (for any reason). Even if it is a person who is nice with animals, I think it is essential that this person be informed before buy it. Indeed, too many people buy a pet because it is cute but one month later, they sell it or abandon…

To resolve these problems, we have to do something. Firstly, I think every owner should be learn all main information about the animal he wants before buy it. Secondly, the space for cat or dog must be increase in pet shop.