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It is often considered  that change is more beneficial  to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think  the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages?

 It is widely believed that making adjustments in life is significantly more beneficial than reimining in the same state. In my personal opinion, taking risks an trying new things can be even more rewarding.

By creating new experiences in life, one can awaken their sense of exploration and discover new ways of doing things.Trying something in a different way can lead your perspectives to a sudden change in perspectives. I can attest to this from my own experience of living abroad where  I not only learned about other language by getting out of my comfort zone but also tried new recipes of Philipine  and Indian cousine. This was worth it  and  It could be applied to one´s  lifestyle in terms of healthy routines such a diet that improves the overall performance of one. Although it maybe difficult to adjust at the begining, making small changes can significantly improve one´s well being and lead to a stronger and healthier body.

However, there are also disadvantages when trying something new without proper preparation.  It is essential to plan ahead and organize oneself  by creating and itinerary and routine before attempting something unusual in life. Merely having the desire to change  is not enough  to be  successful in a project. Therefore, researching new opportunities  and knowing the requirements is crucial.  For instance, if one plans to study abroad, fulfilling visa and  language requirement and saving some money are essential steps. Failure to meet these requirements can result in a nightmare rather than a dream come true. Thus, while taking risks and trying new things can be beneficial , it is important to be realistic about one’s limitations.

To sum up, despite the potential drawbacks, I believe that  there are significant benefits to changing behaviors in life. by taking calculated risks and doing adjustments , one can improve their quality of life and make it easier to navigate.