An error in my writing
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In my class of writing, we are doing a paper. We are required to avoid fragments, run-ons, comma splices, no-parallelism, incorrect punctuation, etc.
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In my class of writing, we are doing a paper. We are required to avoid fragments, run-ons, comma splices, no-parallelism, incorrect punctuation, etc.
I will start a series of stories and texts that I'll send everyday (I hope I can do it). They may be true or made up stories, but I'll try to explain myself the best I can do. The prime reason being that I have to pass an advanced English exam in june and I want to force myself to improve my written English by typing short texts that hopefully you will help me correcting them.
The current paper is summarizing the description of a new invention. At the beginning, it was thought of as a domestic appliance, however, after careful studies, it was built as a big one reserved to companies and government institutions.
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Bonjour,
J'aimerais échanger pour progresser en anglais et aussi en mandarin. Si vous êtes intéressé(e)s par un échange via skype ou en face à face, contactez moi et je serais ravie de vous aider en français.
A bientôt
Hi, I would like improve my english and/or my mandarin. If you are interesting, let's improve.
I think that English classes in which used only English can help students to improve their language skill. I have two opinions to support this idea.
First of all, one of the reason that Japanese students are not very good at English is that they seldom have opportunities of speaking or listening to English in Japan. They need to have more chances and ones should be given students as much as possible to improve their skill.
I visited to Fukushima to meet a friend of mine last week.
Fukushima is known as a place which suffered by the gigantic tsunami and the accident of nuclear power plant six years ago.
I had visited there four years ago too. I had found many trait of tsunami there at that time. But among this trip, I cound not find any trait of it.
(please excuse the lack of accents)
Hi, my name is Alston. I'm a native Chinese speaker. I know how to write traditional Chinese words(including calligraphy) and that'sthe real Chinese tradition. I'm seeking for someone to help me with very basic Deutsch. If you can, we can talk in English to help each other. Without the skill of reading and writing traditional Chinese words, you will lost the chance to know our history and culture. It's 5000 year old, one of the most longest history in the world.
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