I'm not sure whether I used all the phrasal verbs and grammar right. If not, please help me correct them, thanks!

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I take pains to correct my pronunciation, because it’s said no royal road. 

I take pleasure in listening to classical music.

Recently, I started learning english. I want to speak english fruently, because many foreigner live in my town.there is Yokosuka navy base. My hobby is listtening music(UK rock,EDM), reading novel and comic(I wanna read original marvel comics) Thx.

Recently, I started learning english. I want to speak english fruently, because many foreigner live in my town.there is Yokosuka navy base. My hobby is listtening music(UK rock,EDM), reading novel and comic(I wanna read original marvel comics) Thx.

Can some one please help me with this?

A fellow who is working at the chemical laboratory up at the hospital.

In this sentence, what does up mean?

How different it is from below?

A fellow who is working at the chemical laboratory at the hospital.

I live in the French Alpes, the waiter is milder, and soon the spring, because my bees start go out the beehive and come with pollen.

I had got six hives but  now i have only five.one is died this winter, it's not more one on six it's good but it's will better if all the hives had take le winter.

HI EVERY ONE, I´M FROM MEXICO

I´M ADMINISTRATOR AND I´M LOOKING LEARN ENGLISH AND HELP TO SOME PEOPLE TO IMPROVE YOUR SPANISH

I WISH TO EVERYONE A NICE DAY TODAY

"... Although this movie is very romantic, but we all think in fact that it wasn´t necessary for Rosie and Alex to deal with many twists and turns. We usually say that "love" is more than a feeling, is an action. Therefore if you love people that surround you, just tell them. Don´t presume that others are mind- readers, because that won´t help to bridge the gap, and possibly even will make you regret. Let´s treasure people around us! Don´t wait until the moment they have gone away from us, because that will be too late!..."

One of my friends broke up her boyfriend. She asked me to hear about what happened between both of two. I was willing to accept for her request. After work, we met at a restaurant, and I just listened to what she was talking to me. Though she was disappointed of what her boyfriends said and conducted to her, it seemed she tried to chose her phrases when expressing him so that it did not sound bad about him because I had never met him.

I live in St. Petersburg. Studied art history. Do not know much English, I want to learn to communicate in English, with the person who loves art.

Okay, I made some sentences by my grammer study and I want to know am I correct or not.

1. I remembered that I had met her before

2. I realized that our conversation had seemed so weird to other people

3. I'm going to have my English study helped