On the first day of Snow’s fly lesson, Grace and daddy took the three parrots to the park, there was a river nearby, it was a cloudy day, it looked like it was going to rain, so Grace and daddy didn’t go far.

When Snow was trying to fly in the sky, the wind blew hard suddenly, Snow’s body had just hanged onto a big branch, it was safe now. After the wind went, Snow flapped its wings quickly and flew to its mom and dad. They sang each other in a low voice as if mom and dad were teaching Snow how to control the direction in the wind.

Then, the wind blew again, it was harder than the first time. Molly and Marry flew into the wind and flew back. Snow needed practice, it tried to fly into the big wind, but it didn’t fly fast enough, so it was blown back by the wind. It hit a tree pole. Its wings were all out of control, Snow was dropping down quickly, Molly flew down as fast as it could to catch Snow, then, Snow dropped onto Molly’s back, Molly flew back with Snow. Snow was really tired that it was going out of breath. Grace gave Snow some bread and an apple for a little treat. Snow began to have its lesson again.

It flew and flew, it flew by some trees and flew over the big river, the wind began to blow again. Snow flew as fast as it could, and Snow arrived back soon. This was a success. Grace gave more bread for Snow, and let it fly with her so it could practice flying. Grace told the danger and the success to her mom and dad, everyone is happy, they are the happiest family in the whole world at that time, and Snow is the proudest little parrot at that time.

The danger made Snow success, so the sentence is right, “Failure is the mother of success.”

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