I'll take apart in a domestic English contest nextweek,if I'm be elected I can study in UK for free about one year.I'm really interested in spoken English and writing in English:) Would you help me correct the sentences and give me some advises about my presentaion? Thank you.

   Man and technolog--the brave new world


    Mentioned about "man and technology"It's casually turn out that robots may instead of humans life  such becoming a new species and will be controling the world,etc.To be honest that it’s little more than imagine not the wholly reality.Individuals are not so much as dislike the things as not already excel at use the things effective and efficiently.It seems to me nothing more than significant that checking and balancing between the machines and human beings by taken approaches, education and policy.

   Given a proper instance that explaining the relationship with electronic equipment in
My daily llife.When I writing the paper I do used a member of technique to help me find out how to complete it,asking my language partner his opinion,watching the topic on Ted talk and finding relative article via internet.When I want to collect the article,I realized that  can't remember my password on account,“well, maybe I can write it before the deadline and there are a mountain of interested video on TED talk I want to see”. I’m start at complain about my lap top,getting rid of write the paper instead of watching Ted talke. Do you have the same situation with me.Well,it’s turn out that the obstacle in executing a plan has arisen less via high tech products and more from the lack of self-control.We have to learn the methods of control-outself.

    Technology is a gift of God.This gives us the chance to imagine an entirely different kind of society, a society where the creators and the discoverers  come together with their patrons and their financiers to talk about issues, entertain, enlighten, provoke each other. There are going to be more technology than fewer job,Which brings up another great question: What could possibly go wrong in this new machine age?There are 2 issues in my mind.Frist,The robots may take a segment of basic occupation who not college-educated and works as a laborer, works as a clerk, does low-level white collar or blue collar work in the economy.As a result,to modify the situation will we face with,the education is a huge part of it.Meanwhile,technology deeply impacting education and engaging people, from our youngest learners up to our oldest ones,such attending a lesson，understanding the thoughts of different people,making friends all over the wolrd via internet.

    Second,over the longer term, if we are moving into an economy that's heavy on technology and light on labor, and we are, then we have to consider some more radical interventions, for example,like the policy that paying a part of money to support the children master heigh technology and technique,affording electric equipment for education,teching them how to use machines for their schedule and self-control.

    Machines do make human beings intellectual than the old time in education,economics speacially in society. It gets out of the way and helps us live our lives. And really, it ends up being more human than technology, because we're co-creating each other all the time.