Hello everybody!!!

I'm going to Bristol On the 30th of June, and I need to send a letter to find a job. Please correct me all the mistakes!! :)

Hello!. I'm Irene. I¡m going to Bristol on the 30th of June. I will live in Stapleton Road, and I'm looking for a family who needs my help. I'm nursing in Spain, and I need to improve my English. I love the childrens. In Spain, I worked like a nany with 4 familys, and I want to work like this in England. Maybe, you need my help!. I will be so pleasured to help you.

If you think something to help to improve my letter, please said me!! :)