Well in my last weekend i went to my grandfather house and he give a really beautiful gift... it was a bracelet, black and with some fishes in it, i liked so much, and he saw that i was happy and comes to me and give a hug, and say: be careful with this bracelet when you miss me look for it and remenber that is a thing that represents my feels for you, and i'm almost crying said: my better present you already gives me, my mom and my dad...

SO GUYS WHAT I NEED BETTER IN MY WRITING?