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A pround movie
I'm a big fan of watching movie theatre and home at both ,but it's hardly to find a movie what you want to watch it immediately.Mentioned about latest movie given me deeply impression I called it  a medicine to heal my "mindache".
Wondering about "medicine"and my "mindache"?Let me introduce it，all the feeling came from a move call <mistress america>  not according to affairs but a great story between 80's borned and 90's borned sisters inculded dreams,love,self-reflection.
The old sister called Bruke who want to be a successful New Yorker but ruin her life as usual,such having ideas on mind more than execute it,conplaining about life and feel stress and fragile like a circl.One day her father shaut out her at phone,"Don't just bail.That's what the Cardinases always do,move onto something else,hanging on there!".I memoried of the words her father said when I scared and fragile.Nothings can rescue you than insisting your own dream by yourself.

   Bruke's yong sister called who admire her old sister already be a New Yorker and have no ideas of her suitation.Unfortunately,her sister break up whith her boyfriend at frist on her life.She is such a charming and beautiful yong lady who can't believe it and her friend told her"I needed someone I can love.Not keep up with."love that more significant about feel than appearance or excellent It's person by person.It made my thought deeply and given me a great lesson that don't imagine who you are in others sight just ask them and hang on your dreams.
 
   It's made by Jess Carter who have similiar conception with Wangjiawei.The script made by the old sister's actor and she's action it's amazing!I believe that you can enjoy finding the shadows of your personality as well as reflect on yourself when you appreciating the movie what I recommend.