I'm not sure whether I used all the phrasal verbs and grammar right. If not, please help me correct them, thanks!

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I take pains to correct my pronunciation, because it’s said no royal road. 

I take pleasure in listening to classical music.

One should take note of the traffic light signals before going across the street.

Thank you for letting me get the message that I was in the wrong.

She chose a bad joke to break the ice, and we laughed. Who let us be friends?

Family plays an important role in adults’ interpersonal relationship.

The little girl, sobbing on and off, demands to see her ill mother.

How did you manage to make boss promise to give me a raise?

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