This is a very silly song that I want to turn into a different version, so I changed the music and traslated the lyrics. It doesn´t need to be a good song, it is not good in Spanish, but I want to use correct phrases, so if you can help me... is it ok?

That flower that is blooming. That sun that brights the most. All that things look just like the smile of my mom.

That rose that is awaking. That river running away

All that things look the same, but not the smile of my mom.

THE SWEETNESS OF YOUR EYES, YOUR GAZE, YOUR NAIVETY, THE SMILE WHEN YOU SPEAK TENDERLY.

I’LL FOLLOW YOUR SPEECH, IT GIVES ME REST AND LOVE, SHE ERASES THE SADNESS THAT I´VE GOT

I get infected of joy when you are here with me. The beauty of your smile, oh mom, it sets me free.