Hi everyone!

I am applying for a internship programme in Japan, and a Motivation Letter within 500words is needed. I am not very good at wrtiting cover letters, but could you at least help me correct my letter? Just to make sure it is written in proper English...

Hi everyone!

I am applying for a internship programme in Japan, and a Motivation Letter within 500words is needed. I am not very good at wrtiting cover letters, but could you at least help me with correct my letter? Just to make sure it is written in proper English...

The new law which bans to cook lobsters before stunning them has been enforced in Switerland.

I was a bit surprised to hear that, but I agree with this law.

We, Japanese have a tradition of eating alive fishes, squids and lobsters, etc.

Translation in English of a title caption found today on the Net

Bad news are growing for Anne Hidalgo. For a few months, difficulties have been flying in formation above Paris 's townhall, up to worry the socialist's friends. Let's have a look at the main subjects.  Does someone want to try in French ? 

I think there are mainly two points are requested for to be a valuable son and daughter in Japanese society.

Hello, so I write this to complain about my level in english,first when i was at hight school, i was very good in it, ( you can say 8/10) but  i lost it when i passed to the university  because we're francophon & we speak french as a 2nd language :(  ,, NOW,i don't know how to discuss with strangers , & I avoid completly speaking with them,,i feel ashamed. 

Q: Discipline is an ever-increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. 

Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is precious experience that rural life in summer holiday even short period for the children who have grown up at urban city. They may have a cultural shock, which different from that adults may experience, by the county life because there are forests and rivers that people can walk easily and field that have soil smell.

The most memorable prresent I 've ever received are a hundmade photo frame with a photo of one of my friends and me in it. She gave it  to me on our graduation day from elementary school. We had been good friends since kindergarten, but she move to another city after graduation. In the picture we are both smiling. Whenever I sees it, I remember my happy days with her.