hi  , I wish you all good in new year. Fulfil all dreams , more health and money and small everyday problems. more effects in  learning another languages . finding partner in learning language . everyday more smiles , and nice  people .

Hello guys i'm french. I written this text and, it's not perfect. And i know a lot of sentences needs to be rephrased 

So, help me please :) 

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Hi.

My name is Alejandro, I am Mexican and I would like to speak English fluently.

Over the next year I will strive to learn new languages and cultures, and I will be very happy if I can help you learn Spanish.

  Today, I wish you all a Happy New Year 2016. See you soon.

mail from grandma to her grandson

Dear grandson:

A day i had a great religious experience and i think worth share with you. I went to christian bookstore and i found a car sticker, this sticker said "sound the horn if you love god". However i had have a terrible day, i decided buy it and put it in the bumpers.

Hello I want to learn to speak English and I teach you to speak French. Old computer engineer, I am now retired and I am available.

Thank you to contact me by Skype michel.david1053.

The band consists of a vocalist and a keyboard player. Is it right ? or "The band consists of vocalist and keyboard player" sounds better ?

I mean that there are two persons in my band - one of us plays keys and the other sings.

Hi again!

As I've been doing for a couple of times, I'm going to write a new page of a kind of a diary so that I can practice my writing skills.

Today I'm going to talk or write about architecture.

I went shopping yesterday. You know, it was terrible experience. Preparing for the New Year, lots of people buy gifts and food. They head to supermarkets, they are always in a hurry, and sometimes some of them are a little bit rude. There were no empty places in a supermarket yesterday. And I saw many long lines, although all cash desks were working. I was surprised that some parents took their children to the supermarket. I felt sorry for these children, because many of them looked absolutely drained.

I went shopping yesterday. You know, it was terrible experience. Preparing for the New Year, lots of people buy gifts and food. They head to supermarkets, they are always in a hurry, and sometimes some of them are a little bit rude. There were no empty places in a supermarket yesterday. And I saw many long lines, although all cash desks were working. I was surprised that some parents took their children to the supermarket. I felt sorry for these children, because many of them looked absolutely drained.

Helloy everybody! My name is Pavel, i am from Belarus. I was a student, a solder, now i am working in trevel industry and wantto learn English. I hope you can help me in my bussines, I did many mistakes, because i printed this text only myself without a help any transleters. If somebody want to help me i will be satisfied and i try to help in Russian. Let's go guys and girls)