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An ordinary Chinese's thoughts about Compitalist China's future

Actually, the below writing is based on my reply to a comment by a Mixxer friend on my previous writing "Communist China?"

As you can see, we can discuss such matters openly here in China, which was probably unthinkable 30 years ago. The only thing we should't do here and today is to say "Down with XXX" openly on the street. :)

As always, your corrections and comments are welcome!

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Professional athletes make good role models for young people

Professional sporstmen frequently become the idols for people especially for teenagers. The good example is a football: this game is extremely popular today end every second boy wants to be like a football player, because footbal players are sucessful, rich, attractive and they dont have to work in the boring office. Instead of that they just play football so they do their favorite job. Moreover such people are very purposeful, they know exactly what they want, they used to overcome difficulties.

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work email

Dear Mr./Ms.

Would you please find the attachement of your department o-chart, we will adjust our SAP after you confirm. It's very important for us, because it affects your department orgnization in SAP system.

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A TOEFL essay: living in a weather changing country or not

Some people prefer to live in places that have the same weather or climate all year long. Others like to live in areas where the weather changes several times a year. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Please do not pay to much attention to the content(the ideas) itself but mainly to structures, the effectiveness of the sentences. Thank you in advance.<!--break-->

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Practising English

Hi! 

It is the first time I write here, so I am not sure about what to say.

I would like improve my English skills, mainly speaking and writing.

Well, I need improve my vocabulary too, but I think I could do it reading English novels or watching English series.

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