A week before Nowruz of this year my father and Mr. Safarpour had scheduled to be in Shiraz for Eid night. So, we picked up our suitcases and luggage set, and it was Esfand 29^th that we walked to the road and began our trip. Since roads were extremely quiet, we sure we have plenty of time to be in Shiraz before ceremony would be held. So, we had several stops along the way and we enjoyed the beautiful scenery of Yasooj.

Hi!

I am Kaoru.

I'm a university student in Japan.

I'm majoring in English!

I wanna study abroad!

But I'm not good at English.

So please collect it!

For I am going to take an exam which will require to write a text in 220-260 words, I am practicing by answering some samples of it that are available on the Internet. I will fully appreciate any help, corrections and tips would be very welcomed. This time, the task concerns writing a contribution bearing in mind the information given in the exam, which is as follows:

Liverpool was just a small port town in the 17th century but developed rapidly via trading with Virsinia of the United States and with the West Indian Islands. But that didn't last long.

After WWII, the city's economy began to turn down and many people lost their jobs.

Yesterday I was outside the city, I visited an island very famous. We taked a catamaran, everyhing was fine till the catamaran stop working, so all us was stucked in the middle of the ocean. The captain called for help, and while we  was waiting eveyone was making joke about the issue. Some people make comparations with the titacnic, some people begin dizzy and for putting more action starteo rain.... you just can imagine the situation.

In the town center a valley lies east and west and the railway runs along. The Edinburgh station is located at the heart of the town center, immediately below the North Bridge. Near the station is Princes Street, the main street of the town where well-known shops stand side by side. You can find an information centre at the plaza by Princes Mall. The railway separates the town into the Old Town to the south and the New Town to the north.

Hi everyone!

All our life we are gaining knowledge through many different ways. And of course the most reliable way is to study at a high school or at a university. The point is that somebody prefers to have a rest from an education process after a high school and dedicate a period of time to travelling or working. The others prefer to start a university education right after a high school. The first approach is more convenient for me.

I received corrections by kind persons before. I have just a few sentences I can’t translate to my wishes. So please correct the bold sentences following. “____ “(underline) means that some words will be there but I can’t find those answers.

And I wore Japanese translation for the purpose of informing the meaning.

Ounce upon a tim, there wiz a little Pince who licked to go working down the loin. That he wood sea amimals und his fayvorite wiz squirrels an spacily rid squirrels tat are ragher these gays dang ray squirrels. Ass four bards he wizsnot bathered, althrough there have manny fit bards and sum thin, sum bag und sum smel.