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Where has my English skill gone?

About 20 years ago, I tried very hard to use English as much as I can everyday during my stay in Canada for three months.  I took a few English lessons almost everyday, and hung out a lot with non-Japanese people in order to avoid from speaking in Japanese, my mother tongue.  I listened to news and dramas in English so much that my ears got confused:  I even felt as if I heard English when I actually heard Japanese people having conversations.

Fake letter (about animals sentience) to progress in English

Someone can correct my text ?

I am a biology student and I have seen your video yesterday about your pet shop. I am very chock by what I heard.

Indeed, when we listen you, we feel that animals are simple object that we can buy easily like we buy a bread. It is not normal. Moreover, you sell a pet to someone without advice whereas in the most cases, this person never had pet in its life.

In many countries today young people are forced to get a job which they are mot suited to or passionate about.

In many countries today young people are forced to get a job which they are not suited to or passionate about.

What do you think may be the reason for this?

What problems might this cause?

*When you check my writing, please check if my writing is response to questions, coherence, cohension, grammatical range and accuracy.

 

Nowadays, getting a job after graduating high school or college is quite common.

Edits

Hello,

I've decided that I'm just going to edit things without abandon, so please correct me if I'm wrong on any account, or if you just disagree regarding writing style.

The next thing I write will be an introduction.

 

I'm sure I've used the puntuation wrong...

I just installed Skype today.

I just installed Skype on my smartphone today. Actually, since I don’t have a headset, I decided to use my smartphone, not my computer.By the way, have you ever heard of LINE? LINE is an App like WhatsApp. Most Japanese people are using LINE, not WhatsApp. I think LINE is more fun than WhatsApp, because you can use many fun stickers on LINE. If you wanted to chat with Japanese people, it might be good for you to use LINE:)

迷う

私はとても寂しくて私の手紙が迷いていました。どこですか。どこに行きますか。どしてあれはありません。私の手紙が星です。